August 21, 2012

Breath of life...

Posted by kadak sing at 11:47 PM
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Rat poison. Resignation swept him in waves as he reviewed his decision mentally. Mona wasn’t at home and life wouldn’t present him a better opportunity. Life. The humor of the morbid thought didn’t escape him and his lips curved into a crooked smile. He twisted the cap open. If life can make me laugh in my proposed finality then I am not done yet, he smiled emptying the bottle in the drain.

7 comments:

Soumya on August 22, 2012 at 12:01 PM said...

WOW!! That was deep.

And amazingly beautiful. Life and resignation, that's all it is about at times.

aks on August 22, 2012 at 7:42 PM said...

thanks soumya :) was my first attempt at 55 !

Noopur on August 23, 2012 at 11:50 AM said...

wow!!!

http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/

Andy David on August 24, 2012 at 5:11 AM said...

Dear Soumya,
Yes, that was deep and touching. You left me thinking that such sadness do exist. Good write my friend.

aks on August 24, 2012 at 7:43 PM said...

thanks :)

Smita on September 3, 2012 at 10:28 AM said...

loved the quick clever writing :-)

aks on September 19, 2012 at 10:12 PM said...

thanks :)

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