August 24, 2012

My Mirror Talking

Posted by Soumya at 5:10 PM

Mirror eyes, talking to me
Like the stars stooping low
There is a spark at my chest
As I watch my heart glow

I'm the ocean flowing free
Ripping through like a song
Mending my broken wings
I'll soon fly, it wont be long

Someday, the song will end
Somehow I'd trace the way
I'll now look carefully
I'll learn what each hour had to say

No need for a hidden cry
Loud lies can never be true
No matter what you try to hide
The mirror can always see through you

Thunder storms deafen me
The rain is here after the wait
With the pour comes the hope
That tiny drops can change my fate

You were the solid paper
To my dreams of molten ink
Your boat reached the shore
While mine was meant to sink

But I held on and fought the wind
Thus I learnt how to sail
I did let out a long cry
It was of joy and not a wail

The mirror screams but never lies
May hide things you don't want to show
Facade after facade, blocking the view
No matter what, the heart does know

The face in the mirror understands
I can't make love out of nothing
The very fact that you still exist
Makes my everyday worth something


meoww on August 25, 2012 at 8:39 AM said...

LADY!!!!! beautiful..profound..mesmerizing.
the never ceases to shout out loud the truth to much ever we deny it to ourselves..and that is why its our best friend and critique.

loved this one gurll..

Soumya on August 27, 2012 at 11:53 AM said...


Thanks darling <3

Keirthana on August 30, 2012 at 7:54 PM said...

Wow was all I could manage!

//The face in the mirror understands
I can't make love out of nothing
The very fact that you still exist
Makes my everyday worth something//

I could think of no better way to put it :)


Sunitha on September 1, 2012 at 12:54 AM said...

wow.. That would be the best poem I have seen on DOV till date.. :) Hats off to you.

Ashwini C N on September 2, 2012 at 9:37 PM said...

The whole world might make a lot of assumptions about us, but the mirror is the best companion coz we see ourselves in our own eyes and not from other's view.

I don;t think I was able to make my point in the right words, Hope you understand what I'm trying to say.

Awesome :-)

Smita on September 3, 2012 at 10:17 AM said...

a sad heart poetry :-):-) makes me sad :-) gud luck darling :-) may your heart find peace soon :-)
loved the picture and last para

Soumya on September 5, 2012 at 5:15 PM said...

Thank you :)

WOW!!! Thanks :D

@Ashwini C N,
I do :), thank you!

Just a state of mind dear. Peace is all I have now :D
Thank you.

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