October 8, 2013

Orange

Posted by Soumya at 5:34 PM

He said he'd come. I waited, sitting in our usual spot at the park watching the glistening sun. He probably lied to me, but I was willing to take the chance. I loved him. I wasn't sure if he did. I waited, as the sun slowly set, enveloping me in orange.

~ Soumya

7 comments:

Preeti S. on October 9, 2013 at 1:13 AM said...

Simple and beautiful.

maithili on October 9, 2013 at 9:57 AM said...

Magic of 55 words :)

Soumya on October 9, 2013 at 12:40 PM said...

Thank you :)

Aditi Ray on October 9, 2013 at 1:18 PM said...

beautiful lines.... brought back some old memories...

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Soumya on October 11, 2013 at 5:39 PM said...

Thank you guys!

Lubaina E. on November 6, 2013 at 8:51 AM said...

This post is oh-so-lovely :)

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