October 9, 2013

Behind The Veil

Posted by CookieCrumbs Inc. at 8:00 AM
The mirror reflected her beautiful eyes, spilling over with equal parts of love and pain. And then, he came up behind her, laying a white dupatta gently over her head, both charming grin and messy hair in place. Realization dawned - he was gone and so was her ability to love so deep, so pure.

 P.S: Not my genre of writing, not by a far shot.


maithili on October 9, 2013 at 9:57 AM said...

I had to read it twice to make sure I read right!

Soumya on October 9, 2013 at 1:29 PM said...

Ditto. I read it thrice to get it right. Wow again.

Ph_ on October 11, 2013 at 10:18 PM said...

beautiful yet tragic

Keirthana on October 13, 2013 at 3:13 PM said...

A tragic story written beautifully. Shortness of it made it even more reaching.

Smita on October 18, 2013 at 10:13 AM said...

I read it more than once because its simply an awesome post :-)

Perfect expressions potrayed :-)

Smi Mo on November 17, 2013 at 9:13 AM said...


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