February 3, 2016

I Survived

Posted by DeeDee at 6:05 PM
I shall always remember walking this path with you
PC: Upvenue
Today is the day you bid adieu

I wish I hadn't waited for that second and led you through the road across
I was too busy taking up calls

I saw you turn & look at me
The last look, who knew it would be

One moment is all it took
That moment when my life shook

You died, I survived
In so many years dear, I survived but every day a thousand deaths I died


Blogoratti on February 3, 2016 at 7:45 PM said...

What a sad, yet thoughtful one. Getting over a loss is the most difficult thing. Warm greetings.

DEE DEE on February 4, 2016 at 4:15 PM said...

Yes Blogoratti it is difficult
Thanks for the comment

rohit Iyer on March 2, 2016 at 10:54 PM said...

Nice work! Every time someone leaves this realm, they inadvertently take many move with them... Some alive, until they take away pieces of many a someones with them...
Emotions, relations and bonds!! C├ęst la vie!

Loco mente on March 18, 2016 at 4:19 PM said...

Soul stirring!

ANNA on September 3, 2016 at 4:17 PM said...

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Smita on September 16, 2016 at 5:46 AM said...

Its just one moment that changes it all!

DeeDee on September 21, 2016 at 11:56 AM said...

Yes Rohit I agree with you
Thanks for commenting

DeeDee on September 21, 2016 at 11:57 AM said...

Loco mente
Thank you

DeeDee on September 21, 2016 at 11:57 AM said...

Anna :)

DeeDee on September 21, 2016 at 11:58 AM said...

Smita yes it does
Thanks for the comment

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