It's a saturday night,
and we are out for a drive.
we choose the lonely route,
with you I feel so alive.
Listening to the beats,
lost in our talks.
Little did we realize,
when the midnight knocked.
We stop by to feel the cool breeze,
your arms still feel so warm.
Oh! the great ocean of love,
and the lord of sweet misty wine.
The cold night, the dew drops,
the moonlight and the stars.
they all acknowledge our presence,
and try to hide their scars.
Are they jealous, do they envy,
or are they just happy at our sight!
I can stay here... just you and me,
in this long starry night.
Holding your hands, safe in your arms,
I wish to seal it with a kiss.
The sweet passion erupting within us,
our hearts so full of bliss.
and we are out for a drive.
we choose the lonely route,
with you I feel so alive.
Listening to the beats,
lost in our talks.
Little did we realize,
when the midnight knocked.
We stop by to feel the cool breeze,
your arms still feel so warm.
Oh! the great ocean of love,
and the lord of sweet misty wine.
The cold night, the dew drops,
the moonlight and the stars.
they all acknowledge our presence,
and try to hide their scars.
Are they jealous, do they envy,
or are they just happy at our sight!
I can stay here... just you and me,
in this long starry night.
Holding your hands, safe in your arms,
I wish to seal it with a kiss.
The sweet passion erupting within us,
our hearts so full of bliss.
11 comments:
Beautiful! I could connect to this poem in so many ways... *nostalgic*... <3
Lovely! :D I heart you Ray, you are such a charmer! ;)
Nice poem.Even after the long drive in the moonlit night with twinkling stars above ,he is still in the wishing stage to seal his love with a kiss!!
@Ashish - Thankyou.. it means a lot ! :)
@WOH - babe... u donno how much this compliment frm u means, esp when it comes to poems ! :)
@KP - thankyou sir. :D it feels so proud to get so many kind compliments for a poem (since I'm not a poet) :)
Lovely...:) I HV been living in goa for years now .nothing beats being at the shore in a calm starry night..listening to waves clashing.. Cool bridge..n company of the beloved.. Your poem made it seem even more beautiful then it already is :)
Lovely write-up! It's the dream of everyone :)
@jemina - I can so imagine! Goa is THE destination! and thanku so much ! :D
@Keirthana - I know woman... and thanx ! :)
I love your blog..It is so refreshing…
Romanticccccccccc :) beautiful poem
Bikram
Hmmmm...:)
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