June 18, 2013

Wet Moon - Monsoon Memories

Posted by Soumya at 5:12 PM
It started with a tiny drop
And then it started to pour
But we wanted to see each other
Temptation striking the core

In the pouring torrent
I reached the place all wet
Sitting there waiting for you
In the wonderful romantic set

You arrived five minutes later
Soaking wet but smiling wide
I could then see the love lorn man
As well as the innocent child inside

As we snuggled under the orange umbrella
Sipping our coffee piping hot
Your hand remained entangled in mine
Everything else then seemed the unnecessary lot

Our first tryst with monsoon shall always be the best
Where we were trying to understand the other
It was a steady ramp up since then
As the rain and love brought us together

The heavy rains continued to pour
It sure was a very wild season
Yet we couldn't stay a day apart
Getting caught in a downpour was not enough a reason

As we paddled our way through hours
An effort not once it did seem
Being together was the common goal
As we became the peers of our realm

Day after day we still met
In spite of the tearing and crying cloud
We didn't let anything stop us
Looking back now, I feel so proud

Be it standing under the shelter of a tree
Or you hurriedly zipping my jacket up
You've held me tight to prevent me from the chill
While I look cold like a lost wet pup

During last years rain, we were lovers
This time we get wet together as man and wife
As I watch you dance in the rain
I know God has given me the best ever life

Even though we had a mid summer wedding
Special shall remain the beautiful monsoon
The sun can shy away and hide
As you kiss me, under a wet moon

6 comments:

PeeVee™ on June 18, 2013 at 5:18 PM said...

Touchwood :) And God bless <3

Sunitha on June 19, 2013 at 5:23 AM said...

Loved it , though I felt the rhyme was a bit contrived in places..:) The feelings might have come out a bit more evocative , had you not tried to rhyme everywhere...Still the romance in the rain was really sweet to read..

Soumya on June 19, 2013 at 12:14 PM said...

@PeeVee: Thanks <3

@Sunitha: Thanks for the suggestion. But I'm a sucker for rhymes. Will try to do a better job next time :)

Keirthana on June 19, 2013 at 12:48 PM said...

Loved the flow and I agree with Sunitha on the rhyming. But we do have our fetishes ;)

Keep rocking!

Gayathri Baskaran on June 21, 2013 at 1:50 AM said...

Brought on a smile :) Nice one!

Soumya on June 25, 2013 at 2:24 PM said...

@Keirthana, Oh yeah the rhyme fetish. I might write a rhyme and then die :P

Thanks!

@Gayathri, Thanks. That's an awesome blog you have :D

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