To You...
I may mean nothing
But to Them
I mean the World.
You don't love me
But They love me a lot.
You don't care for me
They care for me a lot.
I don't concern You
Am the only concern for Them.
I am invisible to You
Am the only creature visible to Them
Forgive me My Heart
I made you suffer
I am the reason you cry today
Broken into pieces
Broken by white lies
Broken by false promises
Dear Love
I cannot hurt Them for You!!!
11 comments:
This is an amazing piece of writing. Touching.
Loved it!!
At first I thought its a usual he-she love poem, but as my eyes continued to move down, the little piece was far more amazing than I thought it to be! A heartfelt and love-able poem :)
Thankyou Nisha
It actually touches the usual point between He&She, just with a different choice of words :-)
Beautiful, simple but meaningful... :)
Stay Blessed
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I don't fully get this poem, but I feel like you do need a hug. :*
to make a twist in poem we should have some writing quality.... really loved this experience... take care...
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Beautiful weave....
thank you all :)
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