September 30, 2013

Green

Posted by Soumya at 3:09 PM

I did not love him. But the way he was looking at her, was troubling me. She looked back at him and smiled. He looked pleased, I turned a bright shade of green. I held his hand, he looked at me. I kissed him. She left. He smiled.

~ Soumya

4 comments:

maithili on September 30, 2013 at 6:30 PM said...

:D You know to tell a story in just enough words.

Keirthana on September 30, 2013 at 11:05 PM said...

Brilliant play within 55 words :)

Soumya on October 1, 2013 at 1:08 PM said...

Thank you ladies :)

Smita on October 3, 2013 at 10:18 AM said...

Good spin of words there!

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