September 30, 2013

Emotions in Fifty Five words

Posted by Deepa at 12:13 PM
P.S: This is the first time I have tried my hand on mini-stories. I don't know if i have justified them well. Your opinions will be totally appreciated


Taking one look at the pink bundle in her arms made his heart melt.He didn’t want this little baby.He wanted her to abort it. But,seeing this little angel now he knew he was totally wrong.
He felt privileged. He swore to protect his little daughter more than his life.
He will be the perfect Dad

College Memories

Walking down the streets of her college, Ridika felt a surge of nostalgia getting over her.
The first day in college, white classrooms, old steps, the canteen gossip, old crushes, letter, fights, that farewell party.
Every memory deeply etched in her heart.
The only song echoing in her head was Shaan’s “Tanha dil tanha safar” 


Adorning a red 9 yard saree,loaded with lot of gold, flowers on her head and so many ladies fussing over her
There was a weird feeling of mixed emotions, she knew its time
Soon,she will sit on her Dad’s lap and amidst holy mantras, she will become someone’s wife and tears welled in her eyes


She could not come to terms with the news she received.She was lost in trance.
Sitting in the middle of the room wearing a white saree,staring at the picture of the man she loved the most.
He couldn’t leave her and go so suddenly,he was with her this morning
No, It was not his coffin


Ph_ on September 30, 2013 at 2:56 PM said...

So many phases of life precisely yet completely described. :)

maithili on September 30, 2013 at 6:29 PM said...

I m just speechless. And you say this is your first 55 :O Brilliant this is!

Keirthana on September 30, 2013 at 11:07 PM said...

The circle of life indeed! You have done a great job :)

Deepa on October 9, 2013 at 12:20 PM said...

Ph Maithili Keirthana Thank you.. this is really encouraging

Ganga on October 9, 2013 at 12:27 PM said...

cool.... very nice.... these are not short stories though... Very Short Stories...

captures each emotion perfectly

Deepa on February 27, 2014 at 6:47 PM said...

Ganga 50 words it had to be :)

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