May 9, 2012

Heartbroken

Posted by Shreya at 10:08 AM
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A tear finally escaped and traced its way down her cheek, as she struggled to face reality. She still couldn’t believe it. After all the trust, time and energy she had invested. To be betrayed and discarded so painfully. With a final heartbroken sob, she let go of the broken heel, and hobbled back home.



16 comments:

PeeVee™ on May 9, 2012 at 10:56 AM said...

So this was about the heel? :D

Shreya on May 9, 2012 at 11:23 AM said...

Ever had your most expensive and beautiful pair of heels give out on you?! ;)

CD!!! on May 9, 2012 at 2:51 PM said...

hehe....Been there, Done that! So I understand :( :D

Keirthana on May 9, 2012 at 3:14 PM said...

Ha ha... Nice one there :)

sp.ajay on May 9, 2012 at 6:45 PM said...

I read and interpreted it, as the girl cried not on the broken heel. People say good things are beautiful; pain is beautiful too! Good times burn out like a cracker- light, sound and dead! Pain burns like a candle- slowly it shimmers, burning itself out, tiring itself in the process.

(the url makes me rethink, she cried on the broken heel! :P)

The Narcissist on May 9, 2012 at 8:41 PM said...

Do women have a foot fetish of some kind? ;) Good one

Simran on May 9, 2012 at 9:13 PM said...

Hi :)
I stopped here many times but somehow never left my comments but today after reading this beautiful note .... :)
You have a gorgeous blog! Following you :)

Keep writing

Mystical Skeptical Me on May 9, 2012 at 9:28 PM said...

Ah, finally a post that made a few of us, smile and grin even! :D ;) :D :D

Saviour, you be! :D :D Cute note - about the *tch* discarded heel. Uff. Such betrayal of trust, I tell you. <3

Blessed Be Shreya! :D

deeps on May 9, 2012 at 10:09 PM said...

ohh life is like that...
even some straps do snap :P

Shreya on May 10, 2012 at 2:44 PM said...

@CD - Heartbreaking isn't it?! :(

@Keirthana - Thank you!!

@sp.ajay - True that!! Let's just leave the interpretation to our minds ;)

@The Narcissist - Footwear fetish more like it!!! Well...some of us do :P

@Simran - Thank you!!! It's actually a lot of amazing writers in one spot...I love this blog as well :) Hope to see you around again!

@MSM - *blushes and takes a bow*...there should have been a funeral for the heel, me thinks!

@deeps - Too many straps snap in life, if you ask me :( If only a cobbler could repair them all!!!

Confused Soul on May 10, 2012 at 3:02 PM said...

Nice one :)

meoww on May 11, 2012 at 8:31 AM said...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww....i can so relate to this one...sigh....i miss that one special footwear of mine..
we girls are MAD no..?
hihihihihih..

cheers!!

Shreya on May 11, 2012 at 11:02 AM said...

@Confused Soul - Thank you!! :)

@Meoww - Yes we are!! Specially as its almost impossible for the other sex to understand this particular heartbreak :D

Kiara on May 13, 2012 at 11:02 PM said...

Beautifully written =]

One of the best 55wordstories that I have seen so far ☺
Keep it up

Shreya on May 15, 2012 at 1:02 PM said...

@Kiara - Thank you!! That comment means a lot!

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