A bit hesitant,
A bit excited,
Heart pumps feelings,
Hard to decipher.
Ready to be conquered,
Ready to destroy,
The ruler remains unknown,
Of his own secret desire.
She enters,
Wishing to be respected,
He enters,
Wishing her wish
To be respected.
Talks are stampeded,
Slowly silence prevails.
Distance becomes unbearable,
Slowly it vanishes into thin air.
Souls come closer,
Closer to be felt.
Planets take their position,
For something divine to begin.
Hands hold the face frame,
While Eyes stare at the moon,
Each detail is studied,
Of the evening and the noon.
Kiss is presented,
Welcomed warmly by the female.
Male takes the charge,
And love begins to happen.
Hands move down slowly,
Configuring the neck and the waist.
Moving down they stop,
At the curved disturbances at hand.
And she is pulled,
Pulled towards him,
Firmly held in his hands,
Declaring not to leave her ever.
Souls are quenched,
Of the long killing thurst.
What else can be more beautiful,
Than to watch the cupids at work.
A kiss there,
And a peck here.
No part of her land,
Is left undiscovered.
Souls come closer,
Closer to bond together,
Souls need nothing,
But the bond of Love,
To be bound for ever.
P.S. : This is my first attempt at such kind of poetry. Readers, Please be gentle :) Thanks. Love.
15 comments:
Different from anything I've ever read ☺ And it's written greatly as well!
Great post ☺
soul beats...
Sensually enchanting… very powerful and bold attempt…
Doesnt look like a first attempt. You pulled it off very well :)
@Kiara : Thanks for the warm appreciation :)
@Deeps : Yea,it's a bit bold. Thanks for the warm comment.
@WRaziv Basnet : Yea, heavy words are just not the way for my posts.Moreover, according Paulo Coelho, Poems are not mysteries to be solved :)
@Not a writer, just a scribbler : It surely is the first attempt of mine at something like this. Thanks for the comment :)
very passionate and different :)
If this is the first attempt, I wonder wats coming my way now...
keep writing smita!!! :D
way to go gal..!! \m/
the poem brings the feel!!!! A very nice one :)
@maithili : thanks for the appreciation :)
@aditi ray : yea, first attempt! maybe some more passionate words :p thanks for the comment :)
@sindu : thanks :)
Smita - What a coincidence you talked about Coelho and I just put down 'Like the Flowing River'. Anyway your first attempt is a very good read. Hope to read more. Keep writing.
SEXY !!!
i loved the feel of the poetry darling..
keep it up :)
cheers!!
sexy is the word, indeed. A really good post.
Sensuous! :D Loved your first (really?) attempt :D :D
WRaziv Basnet: I love Paulo :D :P Thanks for the appreciation :) More will keep coming :)
meoww: Thanks for the SEXY comment Darling :) Love :)
Roshan: Thanks :P
Mystical Skeptical Me: Thanks :D Yes yes yes, it's my first attempt :D honestly :)
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