July 7, 2012

With you, Without You.........!

Posted by Smita at 10:53 PM


I was living,

I was breathing,
Life was going on.
Things were happening,
Everything seemed to be in place,
Without you even.

I was fine,
I was happy,
Life was smoothly running.
Events came and went,
All was just the way it was supposed to be,
Without you even.

And then came "You",
And the meaning of "I" changed.
And then there was "Your Presence",
And the meaning of "My Presence" changed.
And then came "Your Self", 
And the meaning of "I" totally changed.

Its hard to breathe a second without you,
Its hard to imagine anything without you,
Its hard to  not to be with you,
Its hard to not to talk to you,
Its hard to not to think about you,
Its hard to not to love you,

                                                 You may mean something to this world
                                              But that something is now my whole world.



Sugar on July 8, 2012 at 1:22 AM said...

Beautiful it is.!
u ve summed up everything in those few lines.

Divya on July 9, 2012 at 12:02 PM said...

:) :) :) So cute! It is something that I can relate to :)

Bikramjit on July 9, 2012 at 3:11 PM said...

hope they realise :) loved the romantic poem


Shreya on July 10, 2012 at 12:51 PM said...

Something that is seriously everything I feel! Loved it!

maithili on July 10, 2012 at 4:24 PM said...

beautiful and very very touching :) In a few lines you said a lot of things..

Aditi Ray on July 11, 2012 at 1:21 PM said...

awwwww.... thats a sweet simple poem!!
loved it!! :D

Dipthi Somesh on July 11, 2012 at 2:11 PM said...

cute and nice.. loved it.. a few words said a lot..

Smita on July 11, 2012 at 11:37 PM said...

@sugar : thanks :) summarising all the feelings is hard, but still, i tried my best :)

@divya : :) :) :)

@bikramjit : they do realise :) thanks for the appreciation.

@shreya : thanks :) :)

@maithili : thanks :) :) Appreciate the comment :)

@aditi ray : yea, simple and straight from the heart. :) :)

@dipthi somesh : thanks for the appreciation :) :)

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