Hello Darlings!!
I had written this poem around 3 years back for my Sister with whom i had a fight and we were not on talking terms.... Thought of sharing it here...
I want to be with you,
but your millions of miles away.
i wish you would call just to ask about my day.
it would make things so much better if i could hear you voice,
I guess i can't complain too much, after all this was my choice.
i wish i could hold you in my arms and look in to your eyes.
i promise i will always be true to you and never tell you lies.
its so hard to go to sleep without you by my side.
my tears are the only thing ill ever try to hide.
i lie awake in bed as the tears stream down my face,
they keep going until the hit my pillow case.
I Miss You...
You can visit me at My Creations-The Way To Me
6 comments:
wooooowwwww!!! its beautiful mahnnn!!!! :D :D :D
I completely adore it!! Love it truely nd completely Jass!!
I hav some poet frnds n I m always left awe-struck by the fact tht they craet poems just at the spur of the moment...n i cud never do it!!
so kudos darling!! simply bravo! :D
also wud like to add tht m a bit Jealous of all the ppl who write such beautiful poetry! so u already hav a follower cum Jealous bitch fr u here! ;) :P
keep writing swthrt..!! <3
@aditi:- thanks a lot dear!! Well this was 3 years back and now i suck at poetry... i am more into writing stories....
wud try again but not so soon... lol...
Aaaw!! thanks for appreciating it...
will try some day...
Thanks once again!!
nice :) hope the fight was solved and you did show your cutie lil one this :)
keep writing :)
nice !!!
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@Smita:- The Fight Did Resolve and we still find ways to fightlol..
Yes i did show it to her and she had tears in her Eyes...
@abhinav:- Thanks
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