P.S: This is the first time I have tried my hand on mini-stories. I don't know if i have justified them well. Your opinions will be totally appreciated
Birth
College Memories
Birth
Taking one look at the pink bundle in her arms made his
heart melt.He didn’t want this little baby.He wanted her to abort it. But,seeing
this little angel now he knew he was totally wrong.
He felt privileged. He swore to protect his little daughter
more than his life.
He will be the perfect Dad
Walking down the streets of her college, Ridika felt a surge
of nostalgia getting over her.
The first day in college, white classrooms, old steps, the
canteen gossip, old crushes, letter, fights, that farewell party.
Every memory deeply etched in her heart.
The only song echoing in her head was Shaan’s “Tanha dil
tanha safar”
Marriage
Adorning a red 9 yard saree,loaded with lot of gold,
flowers on her head and so many ladies fussing over her
There was a weird feeling of mixed emotions, she knew its
time
Soon,she will sit on her Dad’s lap and amidst holy mantras,
she will become someone’s wife and tears welled in her eyes
Death
She could not come to terms with the news she received.She
was lost in trance.
Sitting in the middle of the room wearing a white saree,staring
at the picture of the man she loved the most.
He couldn’t leave her and go so suddenly,he was with her
this morning
No, It was not his coffin
6 comments:
So many phases of life precisely yet completely described. :)
I m just speechless. And you say this is your first 55 :O Brilliant this is!
The circle of life indeed! You have done a great job :)
Ph Maithili Keirthana Thank you.. this is really encouraging
cool.... very nice.... these are not short stories though... Very Short Stories...
captures each emotion perfectly
Ganga 50 words it had to be :)
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